Homework
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What are the common things people do in Korea now?
These day, many korea people interested for health.
Eespecally, Young people like running trend.
So, Many marathon festivals open city in korea.
I interested running too. but, I won\'t running gears.
For example, running watch, panths, shoes.
Anyway, I don\'t think really need it me.
Because, it is too expensive now.
I want just enjoy light running.
Thank you T.Divina. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. These day, many korea people interested for health.
>>These days, many Korean people are interested in health.
2. Eespecally, Young people like running trend.
>>Especially, young people like the running trend.
3. So, Many marathon festivals open city in korea.
>>So, many marathon festivals are held in cities in Korea.
4. I interested running too. but, I won\'t running gears.
>>I’m interested in running too, but I don’t own any running gear.
5. For example, running watch, panths, shoes.
>>For example, a running watch, pants, and shoes.
6. Anyway, I don\'t think really need it me.
>>Anyway, I don’t think I really need them.
7. Because, it is too expensive now.
>>Because they are too expensive now.
8. I want just enjoy light running.
>>I just want to enjoy light running.
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