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2025-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How do you react to losing in a game? Is there a healthy way to mentally process losing? Are you more or less competitive than the average person? If I lost the game, I think I\'ll win the next game I try not to lose my [이름]d. I have a competition. I will try to win. I don\' like the lost game. so I always prepare to win. and I comfortable today

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 


-Teacher Ash


If I lost the game, I think I\'ll win the next game

>> If I lose the game, I will be more deter[이름]ed to win the next one. 


I try not to lose my [이름]d.

>> I will try not to lose my [이름]d. 


I have a competition.

>> I am very competitive. 


I will try to win.

>>CORRECT!


 I don\' like the lost game.

>> I don’t like losing. 


so I always prepare to win. and I comfortable today

>> So, I will work hard to win. 


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