homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you agree that mistakes are an important part of learning and growing? Why or why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think it is yes. Because everyone may experience mistake, but It makes me better. So I study hard because my mistake.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. Your writing shows effort and a growing understanding of basic grammar. Keep practicing a little every day. Small steps make a big difference. Great effort! ~Teacher Jane ^__^
I think it is yes.
>> I think mistakes are an important part of learning and growing.
Because everyone may experience mistake, but It makes me better.
>> Everyone makes mistakes, but it makes me better.
So I study hard because my mistake.
>> So I study harder when I make mistakes.
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