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Meet strangers in real life is good to communication. But it is little bit dangerous. Meet strangers in online is dangerous too, but it is comfortable to chat everytime when I want.
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What are some differences between meeting strangers online and in real life?
Meet strangers in real life is good to communication. But it is little bit dangerous.
>>> Meeting strangers in real life is good for communication, but it can be a little bit dangerous.
>>> OR: Although meeting new people face-to-face helps improve communication, there is a small risk involved.
Meet strangers in online is dangerous too, but it is comfortable to chat everytime when I want.
>>> Interacting with strangers online can be dangerous as well, but it is convenient to chat whenever I want.
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