Homework
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At what age do most people get married in your country?
I married 30 years old.
but, these days most of korean late get married.
I think the man usually 35 years old and woman 30 years old.
By the way, There are many not married around me.
I don\'t know these days married have really necessary.
Enjoy your weekend. :)
Thank you Divina.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. but, these days most of korean late get married.
3. I think the man usually 35 years old and woman 30 years old.
4. By the way, There are many not married around me.
5. I don\'t know these days married have really necessary.
Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I married 30 years old.
>>I got married when I was 30 years old.
2. but, these days most of korean late get married.
>>But these days, most Koreans get married later.
3. I think the man usually 35 years old and woman 30 years old.
>>I think men usually get married around 35, and women around 30.
4. By the way, There are many not married around me.
>>By the way, there are many people around me who are not married.
5. I don\'t know these days married have really necessary.
>>I don’t know if getting married is really necessary these days.
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