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think musical have special compared. First musical played a live. I can see the actor sing and dance a live. Second tht music is vivid than the other movies. This reasons are why I like musical.
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In your opinion, what makes musicals different or special compared to other types of entertainment like movies or TV shows?
think musical have special compared.
>>> I think musicals are special compared to other forms of entertainment.
First musical played a live. I can see the actor sing and dance a live.
>>> First, I can see the actors sing and dance live.
Second tht music is vivid than the other movies.
>>> Second, the music is more vivid than in most movies.
This reasons are why I like musical.
>>> These are the reasons why I like musicals.
>>> OR: These things make musicals more enjoyable than other types of shows.
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