homework
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Which country do you guess will win the most gold medals at the next Olympic Games? Why is that country good at sports?
Would you like to watch an Olympic Games opening or closing ceremony? Why or why not?
I am sure it is China. because always china get the most gold medal. and China is many many people.
so They are get many gold medal.
I don\'t watch olypic closing. because I feel depressed. Olympic games are very interested. but it is sad that the olympic games are co[이름]g to end.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing. I agree but I think the US compete head-to-head with China often. So, both of them maybe?
-Teacher Ash
>> CORRECT!
because always china get the most gold medal.
>> China always gets most of the gold medals.
and China is many many people.
>> China also has a lot of athletes.
so They are get many gold medal.
>> That is why they get a lot of gold.
I don\'t watch olypic closing. because I feel depressed.
>> I don\'t watch the Olympics closing because I feel depressed.
Olympic games are very interested. but it is sad that the olympic games are co[이름]g to end.
>> Olympic games are very interesting, but it is always sad when it comes to an end.
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