HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If I\'d be reborn I will
choose bird.
Because I want to
fly in the sky.
If I fly in the sky
I feel happy and excited.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
Thank you so much for answering your homework.^^
I made some modifications that you can review later.
According to several belief systems, rebirth as a bird might symbolize liberation, rejuvenation, or the completion of one\'s life\'s journey.
Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
If I\'d be reborn I will choose bird.
>>> If I could be reborn, I would choose to be a bird.
Because I want to fly in the sky.
>>> It\'s because I want to fly through the skies.
If I fly in the sky I feel happy and excited.
>>> If I could fly through the skies, I\'d be overjoyed and excited.
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