HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
My idea house has long slides.
It has pool and ground.
In ground we can play sports there.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Su [이름]!
(^_^)
An ideal home is one that meets your needs and provides a comfortable environment for you and your family.
A home allows you to express your dreams and live the lifestyle you\'ve always desired for yourself.
Thank you for answering your homework, Su [이름]. I will call you again tomorrow.
Have a good night!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
My idea house has long slides.
>>> My ideal house has long slides.
It has pool and ground.
>>> It has a pool and a yard.
In ground we can play sports there.
>>> In the yard, we can play sports there.
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