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I think that it is very important to have dream and goal.
Before married, I want to grow up myself.
But after married and have children, I want to my family grow up together.
My husbamd will pass the exam.
My children will have safety and comfortable job and their family.
I c[이름]r up their\'s dream and goal.
I\'m happy to think about my dream and future.
So I live life hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]. I hope you\'re having a good evening. You also show a good understanding of sentence structure and can communicate your thoughts clearly. You’re at a good stage where regular practice will really make a difference. Keep it up!^^ ~Teacher Jane
I think that it is very important to have dream and goal.
>> I think that it is very important to have a dream and a goal.
Before married, I want to grow up myself.
>> Before getting married, I wanted to grow old alone.
But after married and have children, I want to my family grow up together.
>> But after getting married and having children, I wanted to grow with my family.
My husbamd will pass the exam.
>> My husband will pass the exam. / I see my husband passing the exam.
My children will have safety and comfortable job and their family.
>> My children will have safe and comfortable jobs, and have their own families. / I see my children getting safe and comfortable jobs, and having their own families.
I c[이름]r up their\'s dream and goal.
>> I will c[이름]r them on for their dreams and goals.
I\'m happy to think about my dream and future.
>> CORRECT
So I live life hard.
>> CORRECT
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