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학생이 쓴 원문
If you can\'t avoid, join them.
I run my small hospital for 9years.
For a long time, there are my accident and events.
Especially people give up theirs job.
So I worked theirs job.
My position is someone else job.
It\'s Ok many job for my hospital.
I prepared to many license.
Simple job is most. So I\'m ok.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Yeon [이름]. I hope you\'re having a good Tuesday. You can write basic sentences and are becoming clear and well-organized. Continue to focus on using capital letters, punctuation, and spacing between words. You show great progress and excellent effort! ^^ ~Teacher Jane c\",)
If you can\'t avoid, join them.
>> If you can\'t avoid them, join them.
I run my small hospital for 9years.
>> I have run my small hospital for 9 years.
For a long time, there are my accident and events.
>> For a long time, there have been my accidents and events.
Especially people give up theirs job. So I worked theirs job.
>> Especially people giving up their jobs, so I had to do their job.
My position is someone else job.
>> My position is to do someone else\'s job.
It\'s Ok many job for my hospital.
>> It\'s okay because there is a lot of work in the hospital.
I prepared to many license.
>> I prepared many licenses.
Simple job is most. So I\'m ok.
>> I do the simplest job, so I\'m okay.
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