Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think it’s good for young girls to play with Barbie dolls? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think it is good. Because Barbie dolls can develop social cognitive ability. And Most children play with Barbie.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Belle. Your writing is clear and well-organized. Focus on improving grammar accuracy, sentence variety, and linking words to make your writing flow more smoothly. I appreciate the effort. Keep it up!^^ ~Teacher Jane
I think it is good. Because Barbie dolls can develop social cognitive ability. And Most children play with Barbie.
>> I think it is good for young girls to play with Barbie dolls because it can develop their social cognitive ability, and most children play with them.
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