Homework
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Why do you think some countries have a low birth rate?
I think the marriage not necessary these day.
Many korean don\'t get marriage too.
Especially, If they want baby many money need until baby to adult.
It is serious problem in korea.
I think korea have to more provide baby policies.
Thank you T.Divina.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Many korean don\'t get marriage too.
3. Especially, If they want baby many money need until baby to adult.
4. It is serious problem in korea.
5. I think korea have to more provide baby policies.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the marriage not necessary these day.
>>I think marriage is not necessary these days.
2. Many korean don\'t get marriage too.
>>Many Koreans don’t get married either.
3. Especially, If they want baby many money need until baby to adult.
>>Especially if they want to have a baby, they need a lot of money to raise the child until adulthood.
4. It is serious problem in korea.
>>It is a serious problem in Korea.
5. I think korea have to more provide baby policies.
>>I think Korea needs to provide more support and policies for families with babies.
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