Homework
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Especially, time is important to me.
I commute long distance.
So I\'m short of leisure time.
But I\'d like to full take a rest and play with my family.
I do spend time divide.
Time is money and gold.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Yeong [이름]. Your writing is improving! You can make full sentences and express your ideas. Keep checking your spelling and word order. A little review after writing will make a big difference. I appreciate the effort you\'re putting into these homework topics. Good job, and keep it up! ^_^ ~Teacher Jane
Especially, time is important to me.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Time is especially important to me.
I commute long distance.
>> I commute long distances.
So I\'m short of leisure time.
>> CORRECT
But I\'d like to full take a rest and play with my family.
>> But I\'d like to fully take a rest and spend time with my family.
I do spend time divide.
>> I try to manage my time.
Time is money and gold.
>> CORRECT
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