Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: What do you think makes a “good school”? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Good school is giving good environment. And good education. So good school giving a smile to students.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You can make full sentences and express your ideas. Keep checking your spelling and word order. A little review after writing will make a big difference. I appreciate the effort you\'re putting into these homework topics. Good job, and keep it up! ^_^ ~Teacher Jane
Good school is giving good environment. And good education.
>> A good school provides a good learning environment and a good education.
So good school giving a smile to students.
>> And a good school should be putting a smile on students\' faces.
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