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I think it depands on.
It\'s important to my heart.
If i am happy to help another person, it\'s okay.
but If not, that\'s not good.
If I help someone, it makes me happy, then it is for my own good.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]a,
Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.
T. Jeny
>>I think it depends on the situation.
It\'s important to my heart.
It\'s important to my heart.
>>It\'s important what\'s on my heart.
If i am happy to help another person, it\'s okay.
If i am happy to help another person, it\'s okay.
>>correct
but If not, that\'s not good.
but If not, that\'s not good.
>>correct
If I help someone, it makes me happy, then it is for my own good.
If I help someone, it makes me happy, then it is for my own good.
>>correct
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