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Hi Clark,
You shared a very honest and thoughtful answer. I can really see how much you’ve reflected on your experiences at work and in life. It’s great that you’re aware of how decisions shape both your career and your personal growth. Your example about rules at work shows responsibility and sincerity, that’s something I admire. You also wrote a friendly message at the end, which made your writing feel warm and genuine.
You did a really good job, Clark. I know you’ve been very busy at work, and
yet you still took the time to write thoughtfully. Keep going at your own pace,
your effort and honesty show your strong character.
~ Teacher Cathy
There have been many times in my life when I had to make difficult decisions - for example, when I entered college, got married, moved to another company, or had to make important decisions at work.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Throughout my life, I’ve had to make a number of challenging
decisions - including entering college, getting married, transferring to a
different company, and making key choices in my career.
Each moment required a difficult decision to make.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Each moment required careful thought.
Among all of them making decisions about hard work at the company is especially difficult for me
>>Among all of them, making difficult decisions at
work is especially challenging for me.
OR>> Of all those times, making work-related decisions has been the
hardest for me.
Becuase I should flollow the rule but sometiems I borke the rule. Eventually, it becomes a problem, and I regret it later.
>>Because I should follow the rules, but sometimes I
break them. Eventually, it becomes a problem, and I regret it later.
OR>> I try to follow the rules, but sometimes I make mistakes, and later,
I regret them.
I should have not done that!
>>CORRECT
OR>> I shouldn’t have done that!
When I going to the work I learned these sentences in radio - Break the rule, I should have not done that!
>>When I was going to work, I heard these sentences
on the radio - “Break the rule,” and “I shouldn’t have done that!”
OR>> One day, on my way to work, I heard on the radio, “Break the rule,”
and “I shouldn’t have done that!”
I am sorry that I can not attend class today. I am planning to meet co-worker after work.
>>I’m sorry that I can’t attend class today. I’m
planning to meet my coworker after work.
OR>> Sorry, I can’t join class today because I’ll be meeting a coworker
after work.
Have a nice weekend and see you monday~
>>Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday~
OR>> Hope you have a great weekend! See you Monday~
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