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2025-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I like to eat sit-down restaurants because it\'s more luxurious and elegant than fast food. Usually it is healthy than a fast food. restaurants can be able to eat more comfortably.

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Hello, Christina!

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Jean~~
                 

                     
I like to eat sit-down restaurants because it\'s more luxurious and elegant than fast food. 
>>> I like to eat at sit-down restaurants because they feel more luxurious and elegant than fast food.
>>> OR: Sit-down restaurants are more refined, so I enjoy eating there instead of fast food places.

Usually it is healthy than a fast food. 
>>> Usually, it is healthier than fast food.
>>> OR: I find that sit-down meals tend to be more nutritious than fast food. 

restaurants can be able to eat more comfortably.
>>> You can eat more comfortably at sit-down restaurants.
>>> OR: I feel more at ease when I eat at sit-down restaurants.

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