Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you want to do to make yourself happy?
I want to rest myself.
I can rest at home. but, I want to alone my free time.
So, long time ago I thought go camping alone.
but, It is that there is so many to prepare.
So, These day I go to the movie alone.
Sometime I don\'t tell to wife about work holidays.
I think everyone has secrets. :)
Enjoy weekend T.Divina. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I can rest at home. but, I want to alone my free time.
3. So, long time ago I thought go camping alone. but, It is that there is so many to prepare.
4. So, These day I go to the movie alone.
5. Sometime I don\'t tell to wife about work holidays.
6. I think everyone has secrets.
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s great that you think for yourself from time to time.
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I want to rest myself.
>>I want to take a rest.
2. I can rest at home. but, I want to alone my free time.
>>I can rest at home, but I want to spend my free time alone.
3. So, long time ago I thought go camping alone. but, It is that there is so many to prepare.
>>A long time ago, I thought about going camping by myself, but there were so many things to prepare.
4. So, These day I go to the movie alone.
>>These days, I go to the movies alone instead.
5. Sometime I don\'t tell to wife about work holidays.
>>Sometimes, I don’t even tell my wife when I have a day off from work.
6. I think everyone has secrets.
>>I think everyone has their own little secrets.
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