homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) She had left in Sweden before she went to Norway.
2) After we had eaten the cornflakes, Henry came in.
3) Before Ken ran to Kerry's house, he had phoned him.
4) After they had packed their rucksacks, they rode away on their bikes.
5) Gerry helped his grandma in the house because his father had told him so.
I used a slide projector at first today although I'm in charge of audiovisual materials.
A professer asked me to use it next Thuesday.
So I tested it whether it does well or not.
It's produced before a long time. I don't know how to use the outdated equipment.
I couldn't separate the tray that puts on a photo slide.
If I apply force in it then it will seem to break.
So I searched product company. Oh my god. That company failed in Korea.
So their branch office in Korea closed.
I just plugged it in. The tray automatically rounded and was separated easily.
Until it was done, it took for 3 hours.
I was very tired.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Happy Friday!!
Thank you once again for doing a great job on your homework.
Maybe we can talk more about your composition later in our class..:D
Take care always Miss. [Name]..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) She had left in Sweden before she went to Norway.
>>correct2) After we had eaten the cornflakes, Henry came in.
>>correct3) Before Ken ran to Kerry\'s house, he had phoned him.
>>correct4) After they had packed their rucksacks, they rode away on their bikes.
>>correct5) Gerry helped his grandma in the house because his father had told him so.
>>correctI used a slide projector at first today although I\'m in charge of audiovisual materials.
>>Today is my firt day to use a slide projector because I\'m in charge of audiovisual materials.A professer asked me to use it next Thuesday.
>>correct..ProfessorSo I tested it whether it does well or not.
>>So I checked if its\' working or not.It\'s produced before a long time.
>>It was produced a long time ago.
I don\'t know how to use the outdated equipment.
>>correctI couldn\'t separate the tray that puts on a photo slide.
>>I couldn\'t separate the tray where I have to put the slide photos.If I apply force in it then it will seem to break.
>>correctSo I searched product company. Oh my god.
>>So I searched on the product company and Oh my God!
That company failed in Korea.
>>correctSo their branch office in Korea closed.
>>correctI just plugged it in.
>>correct
The tray automatically rounded and was separated easily.
>>correctUntil it was done, it took for 3 hours.
>>It toook me 3 hours to finish everything.I was very tired.
>>correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.