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I think healthy food is more important. The calories in food can determine our health. It\'s useless to eat bad food even if you exercise hard.
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I think healthy food is more important.
>>> OR: Nutritious food plays a more vital role than many people realize.
The calories in food can determine our health.
>>> OR: Managing calorie consumption is one factor in maintaining good health.
It\'s useless to eat bad food even if you exercise hard.
>>> Eating unhealthy food undermines the benefits of intense exercise.
>>> OR: Hard training loses its impact if it\'s paired with unhealthy meals.
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