Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What kind of exercise is best for stress relief?
I am very stress at work.
At that time, I usually go to hiking alone.
I go hard to climb, but I feel good when I reach top of the mountain.
There is to relief stress and have fresh air and butiful sights.
Thank you T.Divina :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I am very stress at work.
>>I am very stressed at work.
2. At that time, I usually go to hiking alone.
>>When that happens, I usually go hiking alone.
3. I go hard to climb, but I feel good when I reach top of the mountain.
>>It’s hard to climb, but I feel good when I reach the top of the mountain.
4. There is to relief stress and have fresh air and butiful sights.
>>It helps me relieve stress, enjoy the fresh air, and see beautiful sights.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.