Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a lot of information on the internet. How do you know which information is accurate?
What is your preferred search engine? Why is it the best?
What is your favorite smartphone/apple app? What do you do with it?
I use a NAVER portal. but google web site better than NAVER.
so I use it when I more than information. and I think that famous in the world.
My most favorite app is Youtube. I get a lot of information through Youtube.
and I get laugh and funny.
강사 첨삭
[이름][이름],
so I use it when I more than information.
and I get laugh and funny.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this.
-Teacher Ash
I use a NAVER portal.
>>> I use Naver.
but google web site better than NAVER.
>>> However, Google is better than Naver.
so I use it when I more than information.
>>> So, I use it when I need more information.
and I think that famous in the world.
>>> I think it is the most well-known search engine in the world.
My most favorite app is Youtube.
>>> My favorite app is YouTube.
I get a lot of information through Youtube.
>>> I get a lot of information from YouTube.
and I get laugh and funny.
>> I watch funny videos too.
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