Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the activities that you want to do with your family?
I like outside activities that like hiking, ride bicycle etc.
but, My daughter and wife don\'t like outside activites.
They want to just eat delicious food and take a walk.
So, We don\'t go often outside.
but, These day We tried outside together often.
Thank you Divina. Enjoy weekend. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. They want to just eat delicious food and take a walk. So, We don\'t go often outside.
3. but, These day We tried outside together often.
Happy Friday! Thank you for doing your homework.
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I like outside activities that like hiking, ride bicycle etc. but, My daughter and wife don\'t like outside activites.
>>I like outdoor activities such as hiking and riding a bicycle, but my daughter and wife don’t like them.
2. They want to just eat delicious food and take a walk. So, We don\'t go often outside.
>>They just want to eat delicious food and take a walk so we don’t go outside often.
3. but, These day We tried outside together often.
>>However, these days we’ve been trying to go out together more often.
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