Homework
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What is your ideal body shape?
I am satisfied my body shape.
Only, I would more get muscles my body.
So, These day I try muscles work out at gym.
However, My coworks said \"You need eat protein every day too.\"
It\'s not delicious. Anyway I have some protein and was not open.
Thank you T.Divina. :)
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Only, I would more get muscles my body.
3. So, These day I try muscles work out at gym.
4. However, My coworks said \"You need eat protein every day too.\"
5. It\'s not delicious. Anyway I have some protein and was not open.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I am satisfied my body shape.
>>I am satisfied with my body shape.
2. Only, I would more get muscles my body.
>>I just want to build more muscles.
3. So, These day I try muscles work out at gym.
>>These days, I try to to do muscle work out at the gym.
4. However, My coworks said \"You need eat protein every day too.\"
>>However, my coworkers said, “You need to eat protein every day, too.”
5. It\'s not delicious. Anyway I have some protein and was not open.
>>It’s not delicious, but anyway, I have some protein that I haven’t opened yet.
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