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2025-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Does your country have a good education system? What are its strengths and weaknesses? Which countries have the best schools and universities? Why are they considered good? I think that we have not good education system. because, They have tired the strengths education system. I want to [이름]e the Government for child in the future. I worried for my son. I don\'t know which countries have the best education. however, I hear that many good school and university in USA. I know that many student good brain in USA.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. See you!

-Teacher Ash

I think that we have not good education system. because, They have tired the strengths education system.

>> I think we don\'t have a very good education system because students are always tired.

I want to [이름]e the Government for child in the future.

>> I want to [이름]e the system for my child\'s future.

I worried for my son.

>> I am worried for my son.

I don\'t know which countries have the best education.

>> CORRECT!

however, I hear that many good school and university in USA.

>> However, I heard that there are many good schools and universities in the US.

I know that many student good brain in USA.

>> I know there are a lot of smart students in the US.

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