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2025-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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If you were to move abroad with your family, what food would you miss most? Why? What are some typical snacks from your home country that you can recommend? I miss the Korea style soup. forexample, miss the Kimchi soup, meat soup, korea style food. korea style food is spicy. I like some spicy food. because when I eat korea style food, I am stress out . I like snack. I recommend all the snacks made in Korea. Korea snack plants try to something new snack at every year. It is very delicious and special taste.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],


Thanks for sharing your ideas.

I agree. I think some Korean snacks taste good. 


-Teacher Ash


I miss the Korea style soup.

>> I think I would miss the Korean-style soup. 



 forexample, miss the Kimchi soup, meat soup, korea style food.

>> For example, Kimchi soup and broth soup. 



korea style food is spicy.

>> Korean-style food is spicy. 



 I like some spicy food.

>> I like to eat spicy food. 



 because when I eat korea style food, I am stress out .

>> When I eat Korean-style food, I can release my stress. 



I like snack.

>> I also like Korean snacks. 



 I recommend all the snacks made in Korea.

>> I recommend all Korean snacks. 



 Korea snack plants try to something new snack at every year.

>> Korean manufacturers try to produce new snacks every year. 



It is very delicious and special taste.

>> It is delicious with a very distinct taste. 


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