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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your ideas.
I agree. I think some Korean snacks taste good.
-Teacher Ash
I miss the Korea style soup.
>> I think I would miss the Korean-style soup.
forexample, miss the Kimchi soup, meat soup, korea style food.
>> For example, Kimchi soup and broth soup.
korea style food is spicy.
>> Korean-style food is spicy.
I like some spicy food.
>> I like to eat spicy food.
because when I eat korea style food, I am stress out .
>> When I eat Korean-style food, I can release my stress.
I like snack.
>> I also like Korean snacks.
I recommend all the snacks made in Korea.
>> I recommend all Korean snacks.
Korea snack plants try to something new snack at every year.
>> Korean manufacturers try to produce new snacks every year.
It is very delicious and special taste.
>> It is delicious with a very distinct taste.
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