homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Today my school teacher and other people is going to school homework.
everybody is not fun because everybody is very hard misson.
everyone is want to go home but misson clear we are going to home.
Time is over mission is finish we are very fun and mission teacher is to fun.
Today is not fun only angry and sleepy
강사 첨삭
HI [이름] [이름] ^_^
How are you? I hope you\'re fine. Thank you for sending me your composition. Can you tell me more about this on Tuesday? And also about your long weekend. I was worried about you. I think you were busy that\'s why we didn\'t had our class today. Take Care! See you on Tuesday!
Teacher Nina
Today my school teacher and other people is going to school homework.
>>Today,my school teacher and also other people went to school to do their homework.everybody is not fun because everybody is very hard misson.
>>Everybody didn\'t had fun because they had a mission.everyone is want to go home but misson clear we are going to home.
>>Everybody wants to go home but the mission should be finished and that\'s the time we can go home.Time is over mission is finish we are very fun and mission teacher is to fun.
>>When the mission was finished we were happy and also our teacher.Today is not fun only angry and sleepy
>>Today was not a fun day because I was angry and sleepy.
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