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2025-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What challenges do parents face today that didn\'t exist 100 years ago? Do you think parents should limit their children\'s use of technology and social media? What are some effective ways to discipline a child? A long time ago, I face the some problem. I think that many children watch TV and Youtube these day. It is exposed to a lot of media. There are a lot of videos that the media is not good. I do not show the media. because my son watch the modia in the future. so I do not show yet. I don\'t know that effective education way. I first time too. so I teach that I think the correct ways.

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[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. I agree with you. I think kids these days are exposed a lot online.

-Teacher Ash

A long time ago, I face the some problem.

>> I had the same problem a long time ago.

I think that many children watch TV and Youtube these day.

>> I think that many children watch TV and YouTube a lot these days.

It is exposed to a lot of media.

>> They are exposed to a lot of media.

There are a lot of videos that the media is not good.

>> There are a lot of videos online that are not good.

I do not show the media. because my son watch the modia in the future.

>> I don\'t allow my son to watch online yet because he is going to be watching in the future anyway.

so I do not show yet.

>> So, I do not show it yet.

I don\'t know that effective education way.

>> I don\'t know any effective ways to discipline a child.

I first time too.

>> It is my first time.

so I teach that I think the correct ways.

>> So, I only teach the things that I know are correct.

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