Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream vacation is rest own\'s my time. if i have vacation, i will sleep in late and watch all the dramas. after about 4 hours I deliver tteokbokki and i am going to eat very delicious.
강사 첨삭
Here’s your revised homework, Christina. Appreciate your sharing it with me. Take a look at the edits below. Have a restful night!
Cheers,
Jean~~
My dream vacation is rest own\'s my time.
>>> My dream vacation is having time to rest on my own terms.
>>> OR: A perfect vacation for me would be one where I control my time
If I have vacation, I will sleep in late and watch all the dramas. After about 4 hours I deliver tteokbokki and I am going to eat very delicious.
>>> If I had a vacation, I’d sleep in, binge-watch dramas, and after a few hours, order tteokbokki and enjoy a delicious meal.
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