Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your duties in your family?
I think everyone man\'s same situation,
I have to earn money for my family and I will protect too.
but, I\'m so tired. I\'m old. So, sometimes I want to freedom for myself.
So, These day I\'m looking for new hobby.
Thank you T.Divina :)
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It was so good to see you again today. [이름]. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I have to earn money for my family and I will protect too.
3. but, I\'m so tired. I\'m old. So, sometimes I want to freedom for myself.
4. So, These day I\'m looking for new hobby.
Thank you for doing your homework. Thank you for welcoming me with a bright smile in our class as well!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think everyone man\'s same situation,
>>I think every man is in the same situation.
2. I have to earn money for my family and I will protect too.
>>I have to earn money for my family and protect them, too.
3. but, I\'m so tired. I\'m old. So, sometimes I want to freedom for myself.
>>But I’m so tired. I’m getting old, so sometimes I want some freedom for myself.
4. So, These day I\'m looking for new hobby.
>>These days, I’m looking for a new hobby.
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