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2025-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Question: Do you think anyone can be a leader? Why or why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences. Answer: Anyone can be a leader. Because It is own chance. So our team leader is very a quiet friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Belle. You can write basic sentences correctly and are learning to connect ideas. Keep working on grammar accuracy, especially verb tenses and prepositions. Keep a short daily journal in English. It’s a simple but powerful way to improve. Have a good night. See you in our next class. ~Teacher Jane c\",


Anyone can be a leader. 
>> CORRECT 

Because It is own chance. 
>> However, it\'s a choice. 

So our team leader is very a quiet friend.
>> Our team leader is a friend of mine, but she\'s very quiet. 

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