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2012-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Yesterday, I was very tired because I walked so far.I'm sorry.:) dead : The dinosaur is dead. died : The people died, because the battle. beside : I walking beside my mother. besides : I'm eating ice cream besides cola. Book report.<The little match girl> The little match girl is very poor so she sells her match. If shedont, her father beats her. But the little girl has no shes. She was very cold and hungry. On christmas Eve, she was very cold. Then she turn on the match because match is warmer than now. If match turn on, the little girl sees delicious food and warm stove. But if match turn off she can't see anything. The little girl's grandmother is dead. But litle girl can see her grandmother. And her grandmother take little girl to paradise.In paradise, she can't feel sad, cold and hungry. So she is very happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework! Good job! I made some corrections with your book report too. :) Please review them. Good luck! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Yesterday, I was very tired because I walked so far. >> CORRECT I\'m sorry.:) >> CORRECTdead : The dinosaur is dead. >> CORRECTdied : The people died, because the battle. >> People died because of the battle.beside : I walking beside my mother. >> I\'m walking beside my mother.besides : I\'m eating ice cream besides cola. >> Besides cola, I\'m also eating ice cream.Book report.<The little match girl> >> CORRECTThe little match girl is very poor so she sells her match. >> The little match girl is very poor so she sells matches.If shedont, her father beats her. >> If she doesn\'t, her father will beat her.But the little girl has no shes. She was very cold and hungry. >> The little girl has no matches left. She was very cold and hungry.On christmas Eve, she was very cold. >> CORRECT OR >> On Christmas eve, she was very cold.Then she turn on the match because match is warmer than now. >> She lights up a matchstick to feel warm.If match turn on, the little girl sees delicious food and warm stove. >> If she lights up a matchstick, she can see delicious food cooking on a stove.But if match turn off she can\'t see anything. >> But everytime the light from the matchstick goes out, she can\'t see anything.The little girl\'s grandmother is dead. >> CORRECTBut litle girl can see her grandmother. >> But she can see her grandmother. And her grandmother take little girl to paradise. >> Her grandmother took her to paradise. In paradise, she can\'t feel sad, cold and hungry. >> CORRECT OR >> In paradise, she couldn\'t feel any sadness, coldness or hunger.So she is very happy. >> CORRECT OR >> She became very happy.

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