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2025-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Do you enjoy seasonal foods? Which food do you look forward to each season? What is the best season to visit your country? I like water melon and tangerine. so I eat water melon in summer and eat tangerine in winter. I looking forward to eat the strawberry, water melon, grape and tangerine. I recommand to visit the best season is spring. it is beautiful and warm. There are a lot of flowers. you can enjoy the korea traditional culture. Spring harmonize with traditional Hanok.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your recommendations. See you tomorrow.

-Teacher Ash

I like water melon and tangerine.

>> I like watermelon and tangerine.

so I eat water melon in summer and eat tangerine in winter.

>> So, I eat watermelon in summer and tangerine in winter.

I looking forward to eat the strawberry, water melon, grape and tangerine.

>> I am looking forward to eating strawberries, watermelons, grapes and tangerines.

I recommand to visit the best season is spring.

>> I recommend visiting our country during springtime.

it is beautiful and warm.

>> It is beautiful and warm.

There are a lot of flowers.

>> There are a lot of flowers too.

you can enjoy the korea traditional culture.

>> You can enjoy the Korean traditional culture as well.

Spring harmonize with traditional Hanok.

>> Spring makes the Hanok Village a dreamy place.

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