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2025-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Have you considered running your own business? If so, what kind of business would you like to run? If not, what is a good business nowadays? Would you rather work for a big company or a small company? What are the pros and cons of each situation? wow.. I always concerned about your question. I just can not own business. because I have a my family. I can not try to danger things. and if I try own business, I have a lot of money. However, I don\' have money..^^ That is also my concern all the time. I want to move big company. so I tried to move company. I have a goal. I want to move the NAVER subsidiary company, Hyundai subsidiary company and Samsung subsidiary company. I want to join a company among these. but big company is very hard. In the korea case, big company has weakness. First, work is very hard. Overtime is a daily routine. Second, coworker has a competitive. Third, retire early. so, I challenge the big company before 40 age. Then I choice.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts regarding these questions.

-Teacher Ash

wow.. I always concerned about your question.

>> Wow! These are tough questions.

I just can not own business. because I have a my family.

>> I just cannot start my own business because I have a family.

I can not try to danger things.

>> I cannot do risky things.

and if I try own business, I have a lot of money.

>> If I try to start a business, I should have a lot of money first.

However, I don\' have money..^^

>> However, I don\'t have much money.

That is also my concern all the time.

>> This is also one of the questions I have.

I want to move big company.

>> I want to move to a bigger company.

so I tried to move company.

>> So, I tried.

I have a goal. I want to move the NAVER subsidiary company, Hyundai subsidiary company and Samsung subsidiary company.

>> My goal is to move to one of NAVER, Hyundai or Samsung subsidiaries.

I want to join a company among these. but big company is very hard.

>> I want to join one of these companies in the future, but it is very difficult.

In the korea case, big company has weakness.

>> In Korea, every big company has its own weakness.

First, work is very hard.

>> CORRECT!

Overtime is a daily routine.

>> CORRECT!

Second, coworker has a competitive.

>> Second, everyone is very competitive.

Third, retire early.

>> Third, workers retire early.

so, I challenge the big company before 40 age.

>> So, I prepare myself to work in a big company before the age of 40.

Then I choice.

>> Then, I choose.

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