homework
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Are you good at using computers? If there is a problem with a computer, are you able to fix it?
When choosing a computer to buy, what should people look for and think about? (Do you look at the brand, battery life, screen size and etc.?)
if there is a problem computer, I some can fix it. but I don\'t like fix it. I want to buy computer.
because, computer is very complicated. It\'s very troublesome.
when I choose a computer, I think about weight, cost, CPU the latest. It is important of computer the CPU. The CPU is the head of a person.
so The CPU should use the latest it.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
if there is a problem computer, I some can fix it. but I don\'t like fix it.
so The CPU should use the latest it.
Thanks for sharing your expertise. See you tomorrow!
-Teacher Ash
if there is a problem computer, I some can fix it. but I don\'t like fix it.
>> If I encounter a problem with my computer, I can fix most of it, however, I don\'t want to do it.
I want to buy computer. because, computer is very complicated.
>> I will buy a new computer because it is very complicated.
It\'s very troublesome.
>> It takes some time to fix it.
when I choose a computer to buy, I think about weight, cost, CPU the latest.
>> When choosing a computer, I think about the weight, cost and the latest CPU.
It is important of computer the CPU.
>> The most important thing is the CPU.
The CPU is the head of a person.
>> The CPU is like the brain of the computer.
so The CPU should use the latest it.
>> So, I buy a computer with the latest CPU.
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