Homework
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Public transport has good effects on the environment to private vehicles. If everyone is in one car, there is less fumes and more efficiency than if people are in one car.
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Here’s your revised homework, Christina. Appreciate your sharing it with me. Take a look at the edits below. Have a restful night!
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Jean~~
Public transport has good effects on the environment to private vehicles.
>>> Public transport has positive effects on the environment compared to private vehicles.
>>> OR: Public transport benefits the environment compared to private cars.
If everyone is in one car, there is less fumes and more efficiency than if people are in one car.
>>> If many people share one car, there are fewer fumes and greater efficiency than if each person drives alone.
>>> OR: Sharing a car is more efficient and creates less pollution than driving individually.
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