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I think Koreans are not very good at following protocols.
I believe the younger generations are even more serious in this regard.
If protocols aren’t followed, misunderstandings, delays, and inefficiency can occur, and the overall workflow may suffer.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ha Na!
Thank you for doing your homework. It’s sad to know that Koreans are not very good at following protocol because, like what you’ve said, it can greatly affect others, causing misunderstandings. I hope that people, especially the younger generation, realize how important protocols are.
- T. Caitlyn
I think Koreans are not very good at following protocols.
>> I think Koreans are not very good at following protocol.
I believe the younger generations are even more serious in this regard.
I believe the younger generations are even more serious in this regard.
>> CORRECT
If protocols aren’t followed, misunderstandings, delays, and inefficiency can occur, and the overall workflow may suffer.
If protocols aren’t followed, misunderstandings, delays, and inefficiency can occur, and the overall workflow may suffer.
>> CORRECT
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