Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Take your camera with you, just due to mine doesn\'t work.
2. Even thought having muscle problems, the defender was able to play.
3. Bring an umbrella with you in case it rains tomorrow.
4. Skiing is a safe sport as long as you obey the rules on the slope.
5. All flights to and from London have been cancelled because of fog.
6. They arrived in time for the meeting however having to travel in bad weather.
7. I like travelling by underground, even though it gets pretty crowded during rush
hours.
8. She has been living in the country her whole life. However she has decided
she wants a change and plans on moving to the city.
9. We had a wonderful time in Barcelona. Despite transport workers were on
strike so we couldn\'t use the underground.
10.nevertheless life was hard during the war, we managed to survive
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva,
At first, it would be difficult to change your old ways, but once you train yourself from achieving the things you want to change. It will become a habit and you won\'t forget anymore.
Great job!!! Continue doing your homework cause this activity could help you go a long way to success.
Having you as a student, give me the energy to teach more and enjoy the rest of my classes. Thank you!!
T. Jeny
>>Take your camera with you, just in case mine doesn\'t work.
2. Even thought having muscle problems, the defender was able to play.
2. Even thought having muscle problems, the defender was able to play.
>>Despite having muscle problems, the defender was able to play.
3. Bring an umbrella with you in case it rains tomorrow.
3. Bring an umbrella with you in case it rains tomorrow.
>>correct
4. Skiing is a safe sport as long as you obey the rules on the slope.
4. Skiing is a safe sport as long as you obey the rules on the slope.
>>correct
5. All flights to and from London have been cancelled because of fog.
5. All flights to and from London have been cancelled because of fog.
>>correct
6. They arrived in time for the meeting however having to travel in bad weather.
6. They arrived in time for the meeting however having to travel in bad weather.
>>They arrived in time for the meeting despite having to travel in bad weather.
7. I like travelling by underground, even though it gets pretty crowded during rush hours.
7. I like travelling by underground, even though it gets pretty crowded during rush hours.
>>correct
8. She has been living in the country her whole life. However she has decided
she wants a change and plans on moving to the city.
8. She has been living in the country her whole life. However she has decided
she wants a change and plans on moving to the city.
>>She has been living in the country her whole life. Nevertheless, she has decided she wants a change and plans on moving to the city.
9. We had a wonderful time in Barcelona. Despite transport workers were on
strike so we couldn\'t use the underground.
9. We had a wonderful time in Barcelona. Despite transport workers were on
strike so we couldn\'t use the underground.
>>We had a wonderful time in Barcelona. However, transport workers were on strike so we couldn\'t use the underground.
10.nevertheless life was hard during the war, we managed to survive
10.nevertheless life was hard during the war, we managed to survive
>>Even though life was hard during the war, we managed to survive.
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