homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
people are going to enjoy activity winter sports.
>> People are going to enjoy winter sports.
for example, we enjoy the ski, snowboard , winter hiking and skate.
>> For instance, skiing, snowboarding, winter hiking and skating.
I like sports. but I like ball games.
>> I like sports, especially ball games.
so I am not going to enjoy winter sports.
>> So, I might not enjoy winter sports.
I challenged to trainning during military days.
>> The most challenging winter weather I experienced was when I was in my military days.
Then I experience special days. and I enjoyed with colleague.
>> But I experienced great days with my colleagues.
Although I hard, I get special experience.
>> Even if it was hard, it was a special experience.
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