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There was pain from the left pelvis to the ston before I have a surgery for my back and I especially couldn’t lie down on my bed because of the pain. That’s why I decided to have an operation. After the surgery I did not feel any pains but I feel bad for my back nowadays. So I took a painkiller this morning.
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Hi, William^^
Thank you for answering.
You should really get some more rest.
Don\'t let it get worse.
_T. SHAY^^
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There was pain from the left pelvis to the ston before I have a surgery for my back and I especially couldn’t lie down on my bed because of the pain.
>>I had pain from the left pelvis to the sternum before my back surgery, and I especially couldn’t lie down on my bed because of the pain.
That’s why I decided to have an operation.
>>That\'s why I decided to have surgery.
After the surgery I did not feel any pains but I feel bad for my back nowadays.
>>After the surgery, I did not feel any pain, but I feel discomfort in my back nowadays.
So I took a painkiller this morning.
>>Correct
OR: To relieve the pain, I took a painkiller this morning.
Thank you for answering.
You should really get some more rest.
Don\'t let it get worse.
_T. SHAY^^
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There was pain from the left pelvis to the ston before I have a surgery for my back and I especially couldn’t lie down on my bed because of the pain.
>>I had pain from the left pelvis to the sternum before my back surgery, and I especially couldn’t lie down on my bed because of the pain.
That’s why I decided to have an operation.
>>That\'s why I decided to have surgery.
After the surgery I did not feel any pains but I feel bad for my back nowadays.
>>After the surgery, I did not feel any pain, but I feel discomfort in my back nowadays.
So I took a painkiller this morning.
>>Correct
OR: To relieve the pain, I took a painkiller this morning.
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