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Hi there! I was good to hear your voice from here this morning. I actually felt bad and did not sleep well. So I could not wake up, if you did not call me today. That’s one of the acid reflux affect. Due to chest pain, I can not sleep well and wake up several times to drink water and relieve chest pain.
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Hi, William^^
Thank you for sharing.
You better refrain from eating foods that trigger your acid reflux then.
Try to rest as early as you can.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! I was good to hear your voice from here this morning.
>>Hi there! It was good to hear your voice this morning.
I actually felt bad and did not sleep well.
>>Correct
OR: I actually felt unwell and couldn\'t sleep well.
So I could not wake up, if you did not call me today.
>>So, I couldn\'t have woken up if you hadn\'t called me today.
That’s one of the acid reflux affect.
>>That\'s one of the effects of acid reflux.
Due to chest pain, I can not sleep well and wake up several times to drink water and relieve chest pain.
>>Due to chest pain, I cannot sleep well and I wake up several times to drink water and relieve the pain.
Thank you for sharing.
You better refrain from eating foods that trigger your acid reflux then.
Try to rest as early as you can.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! I was good to hear your voice from here this morning.
>>Hi there! It was good to hear your voice this morning.
I actually felt bad and did not sleep well.
>>Correct
OR: I actually felt unwell and couldn\'t sleep well.
So I could not wake up, if you did not call me today.
>>So, I couldn\'t have woken up if you hadn\'t called me today.
That’s one of the acid reflux affect.
>>That\'s one of the effects of acid reflux.
Due to chest pain, I can not sleep well and wake up several times to drink water and relieve chest pain.
>>Due to chest pain, I cannot sleep well and I wake up several times to drink water and relieve the pain.
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