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2025-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What is more important to you: the ceremony or the reception? What unique wedding traditions exist in your country? I important to reception. I think important the people. A person [이름]d sincerely celebrate. I also important a person [이름]d. we have traditional wedding. we wear the traditional cloth after wedding celebrate. The traditional cloth name is Hanbok. and we wear hanbok and say thank you to our customers one by one in the restaurant. and we introduce the bride and groom for customers. sometimes We share money by saying \"live well\" while families gather in the abandoned white room and toss the prepared jujube and chestnuts slightly to the bride.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this.

-Teacher Ash

I important to reception.

>> Reception is more important.

I think important the people.

>> The people are also important.

A person [이름]d sincerely celebrate.

>> The people came to celebrate.

I also important a person [이름]d.

>> I think the person\'s attitude is also important.

we have traditional wedding.

>> We have a traditional wedding.

we wear the traditional cloth after wedding celebrate.

>> We wear traditional cloth after the wedding ceremony.

The traditional cloth name is Hanbok.

>> The traditional attire is called Hanbok.

and we wear hanbok and say thank you to our customers one by one in the restaurant.

>> We wear Hanbok and thank our guests during the reception.

and we introduce the bride and groom for customers.

>> We also introduce the bride and the groom to the guests.

sometimes We share money by saying \"live well\" while families gather in the abandoned white room and toss the prepared jujube and chestnuts slightly to the bride.

>> We also share money, say our well wishes, and toss jujubes and chestnuts to the newly married couple.

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