Homework
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What recent movie surprised you, and why?
How does the theater experience differ from watching at home?
I watched the Avengers. I was very surprised. because everytime I\'m touched. How can I express it like that.
I like hero series. I like the Iron man among them.
I enjoy the theater. theater is sounds great. I fell when I watched movie, I be more focused. and I memorized.
but theater is dark. sometimes I feel sleepy
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
I like hero series.
but theater is dark. sometimes I feel sleepy
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
See you later!
-Teacher Ash
I watched the Avengers.
>> CORRECT!
I was very surprised. because everytime I\'m touched.
>> I was very surprised because every time I watched it, I am touched.
How can I express it like that.
>> How can I express it better?
I like hero series.
>> I like superhero series.
I like the Iron man among them.
>> I like the Iron Man among them.
I enjoy the theater.
>> I enjoy watching in the theater.
theater is sounds great.
>> It sounds great.
I fell when I watched movie, I be more focused. and I memorized.
>> I fell asleep once, so I fell on my chair that is why I need to stay awake and focus.
but theater is dark. sometimes I feel sleepy
>> But because the theater is dark, it makes me feel sleepy.
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