homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) She was playing hockey. (to play)
2) They were swimming in the pool. (to swim)
3) It was rainning. (to rain)
4) We were listening to music. (to listen)
5) The mobile was ringing. (to ring)
I went to Suwon to meet my friend last Sunday.
My friend Mi-Hyang lately bought a car.
She said to come to her for going a drive.
Actually, as soon as she got a driver's license, she bought it.
And she directly had a car accident.
Fortunately, nobody was hurt.
She alone hit a parking ticket box.
It broke and her new car's bumper was dented.
It dealt with her through insurance and It is repaired originaly now.
I was afraid of driving.
But she is quite good at driving.
We went to the theater by her car, she also drove to the park and the historical site.
When rain and hail fell, she was very calm.
She is a real best driver.
I didn't know why she had an accident.
It's a mystery.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
How are you? How was your long weekend..:)
I think you really had a great time with your friend, but I\'m sorry for what happened to her car, but I think it\'s okay because her car is as good as new..:D
Me too, I\'m afraid of driving, but I think we have to overcome this, dont you think so Miss. [Name]?:D
Talk to you later my dear and take care..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) She was playing hockey. (to play)
>>correct2) They were swimming in the pool. (to swim)
>>correct3) It was rainning. (to rain)
>>correct4) We were listening to music. (to listen) >>correct5) The mobile was ringing. (to ring)>>correctI went to Suwon to meet my friend last Sunday.
>>correctMy friend Mi-Hyang lately bought a car.
>>correctShe said to come to her for going a drive.
>>She told me to visit her to go for a ride.Actually, as soon as she got a driver\'s license, she bought it.
>>correctAnd she directly had a car accident.
>>correctFortunately, nobody was hurt.
>>correctShe alone hit a parking ticket box.
>>correctIt broke and her new car\'s bumper was dented.
>>correctIt dealt with her through insurance and It is repaired originaly now.
>>She dealt with that using her insurance and now her car is as good as new again.I was afraid of driving.
>>correctBut she is quite good at driving.
>>correctWe went to the theater by her car, she also drove to the park and the historical site.>>correct
When rain and hail fell, she was very calm.>>correct
She is a real best driver.>>She is one of the best drivers I know.
I didn\'t know why she had an accident.>>correct
It\'s a mystery.
>>correct
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