homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think kids should play video games? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think kids should not playing video games. Because Video game make our happy. But students are focus on studying.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane ^^
I think kids should not playing video games.
>> I think kids should not be playing video games.
Because Video game make our happy.
>> Video games make us happy.
But students are focus on studying.
>> However, students should focus on their studies.
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