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Hi there! I was driving when you called me. I just arrived at Pusan military hospital. To have a day off is important. Because I don’t have that much time to take a general medical check up while I serve on ship. So when I have a day off, I usually go to the hospital and public spa to recover my body physically. Yeah, when I was young, I do not need that time for recovery but I am not getting younger. Anyway I definitely expect to learn vocabulary a word per day.
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Hi, William^^
Thank you for sharing your answer.
Let\'s plan how we can use our class to help you expand your vocabulary in preparation for the test.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! I was driving when you called me.
>>Correct
OR: Hello! I was on the road when you called me.
I just arrived at Pusan military hospital.
>>Correct
OR: I just reached Pusan military hospital.
Thank you for sharing your answer.
Let\'s plan how we can use our class to help you expand your vocabulary in preparation for the test.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! I was driving when you called me.
>>Correct
OR: Hello! I was on the road when you called me.
I just arrived at Pusan military hospital.
>>Correct
OR: I just reached Pusan military hospital.
To have a day off is important. Because I don’t have that much time to take a general medical check up while I serve on ship.
>>Having a day off is important because I don’t have much time to get a general medical check-up while I\'m serving on the ship.
>>Having a day off is important because I don’t have much time to get a general medical check-up while I\'m serving on the ship.
OR: A day off is very important because I can\'t take a general medical check-up while I\'m on duty on the ship.
So when I have a day off, I usually go to the hospital and public spa to recover my body physically.
>>So when I have a day off, I usually go to the hospital and a public spa to recover physically.
OR: On my day off, I usually visit the hospital and a public spa to feel better physically.
Yeah, when I was young, I do not need that time for recovery but I am not getting younger.
>>Yeah, when I was young, I did not need that time to recover, but I am not getting younger.
So when I have a day off, I usually go to the hospital and public spa to recover my body physically.
>>So when I have a day off, I usually go to the hospital and a public spa to recover physically.
OR: On my day off, I usually visit the hospital and a public spa to feel better physically.
Yeah, when I was young, I do not need that time for recovery but I am not getting younger.
>>Yeah, when I was young, I did not need that time to recover, but I am not getting younger.
OR: When I was younger, recovery wasn\'t necessary, but now it is.
Anyway I definitely expect to learn vocabulary a word per day.
>>Anyway I definitely plan to learn one new vocabulary word per day.
Anyway I definitely expect to learn vocabulary a word per day.
>>Anyway I definitely plan to learn one new vocabulary word per day.
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