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Hi there! Thank you for the new word today! This is absolutely good way to learn vocabulary. If I memorize five words a week for a year, I will learn many new words.
Nobody alleviates my worries except my family. Because I had a difficult time two years ago and it was a verge of bankruptcy caused by someone. I not only lost my whole money, but I was in debt. At that time no one helps and alleviates my issues. But I have been making an efforting to alleviate a financial stress. Anyway I am doing well all of things.
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Hi, William!^^
Thank you for sharing.
It\'s good that you were able to overcome all those things.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! Thank you for the new word today!
Thank you for sharing.
It\'s good that you were able to overcome all those things.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! Thank you for the new word today!
>>Correct
OR: Hello! Thank you for teaching me a new word today!
OR: Hello! Thank you for teaching me a new word today!
This is absolutely good way to learn vocabulary.
>>This is an absolutely good way to learn vocabulary.
>>This is an absolutely good way to learn vocabulary.
OR: This is an excellent way to learn vocabulary.
If I memorize five words a week for a year, I will learn many new words.
>>Correct
OR: Memorizing five words a week for a year will help me learn many new words.
Nobody alleviates my worries except my family. Because I had a difficult time two years ago and it was a verge of bankruptcy caused by someone.
>>Nobody alleviates my worries except my family, because two years ago I went through a very difficult time--I was on the verge of bankruptcy caused by someone.
I not only lost my whole money, but I was in debt.
>>I not only lost all my money, but I also went into debt.
If I memorize five words a week for a year, I will learn many new words.
>>Correct
OR: Memorizing five words a week for a year will help me learn many new words.
Nobody alleviates my worries except my family. Because I had a difficult time two years ago and it was a verge of bankruptcy caused by someone.
>>Nobody alleviates my worries except my family, because two years ago I went through a very difficult time--I was on the verge of bankruptcy caused by someone.
I not only lost my whole money, but I was in debt.
>>I not only lost all my money, but I also went into debt.
OR: Not only did I lose all my money, but I also ended up in debt.
At that time no one helps and alleviates my issues.
>>At that time, no one helped me or alleviated my issues.
OR: Back then, I had no on to help me or ease my struggles.
But I have been making an efforting to alleviate a financial stress.
>>But I have been making an effort to alleviate financial stress.
Anyway I am doing well all of things.
>>Anyway, I am doing well in everything.
At that time no one helps and alleviates my issues.
>>At that time, no one helped me or alleviated my issues.
OR: Back then, I had no on to help me or ease my struggles.
But I have been making an efforting to alleviate a financial stress.
>>But I have been making an effort to alleviate financial stress.
Anyway I am doing well all of things.
>>Anyway, I am doing well in everything.
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