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Hi there! How’s going on? I am still struggling now not to drink today. I definitely wanted to drink, when it’s time to get off work. As you know, my goal this week is not to drink. Of course, I had a strong urge to join my friends for drinks around the time when I get out of work, I endure drinking alcohols. But I ate a lot of dinner instead of alcohols. Anyway I made it successfully.
I have ever made a tentative decision to commence preparing for employment in the US military. But I did not keep going on a tentative decision.
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Hi there, William!^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess eating a lot is a good strategy.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there!
>>Correct
OR: Hello!
How’s going on?
>>How is it going?
I am still struggling now not to drink today.
>>I\'m still struggling not to drink today.
I definitely wanted to drink, when it’s time to get off work.
>>I definitely wanted to drink when it was time to get off work.
Thank you for sharing.
I guess eating a lot is a good strategy.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there!
>>Correct
OR: Hello!
How’s going on?
>>How is it going?
I am still struggling now not to drink today.
>>I\'m still struggling not to drink today.
I definitely wanted to drink, when it’s time to get off work.
>>I definitely wanted to drink when it was time to get off work.
OR: I definitely wanted a drink as soon as work was over.
As you know, my goal this week is not to drink.
As you know, my goal this week is not to drink.
>>As you know, my goal this week is to avoid drinking.
OR: As you know, I\'m focusing on not drinking this week.
Of course, I had a strong urge to join my friends for drinks around the time when I get out of work, I endure drinking alcohols.
>>Of course, I had a strong urge to join my friends for drinks when I got off work, but I resisted.
OR: I definitely felt like drinking with my friends after work, but I held back.
But I ate a lot of dinner instead of alcohols.
>>But I ate a lot of food instead of drinking alcohol.
Of course, I had a strong urge to join my friends for drinks around the time when I get out of work, I endure drinking alcohols.
>>Of course, I had a strong urge to join my friends for drinks when I got off work, but I resisted.
OR: I definitely felt like drinking with my friends after work, but I held back.
But I ate a lot of dinner instead of alcohols.
>>But I ate a lot of food instead of drinking alcohol.
OR: Rather than having more alcohol, I ate a lot for dinner.
Anyway I made it successfully.
>>Anyway, I made it successfully.
Anyway I made it successfully.
>>Anyway, I made it successfully.
OR: In the end, I succeeded.
I have ever made a tentative decision to commence preparing for employment in the US military.
>>I\'ve tenderly decided to start preparing for a career in the U.S. military.
But I did not keep going on a tentative decision.
>>But I did not follow through with my tentative decision.
I have ever made a tentative decision to commence preparing for employment in the US military.
>>I\'ve tenderly decided to start preparing for a career in the U.S. military.
But I did not keep going on a tentative decision.
>>But I did not follow through with my tentative decision.
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