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2025-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, Jeny I made sentence but, it\'s too hard for made sentence I made a bread use to cream, flour and currants fruit the fruit removed wick. Jeny, make a sentence everyday it\'s help to improve my english? but, i still use to korean a lot when i study english. like korean style how can i do this?

강사 첨삭

Hello Jon,

As long as you are trying your best to learn the English language, you are doing fine. Making sentences could enhance your skills in a way; you just have to find the best and right way to study so that you can learn from the process.

It is better to do something than not doing anything at all.

Keep it cool and smile.

T. Jeny


Hi, Jeny
>>correct
I made sentence but, it\'s too hard for made sentence
>>I made a sentence, but it\'s too hard to make a sentence.
I made a bread use to cream, flour and currants fruit the fruit removed wick.
>>I made a bread using cream, flour, and currants without seeds.

Jeny, make a sentence everyday it\'s help to improve my english?
>>Jeny, is making sentences every day, could improve my English?
but, i still use to korean a lot when i study english. like korean style
>>But I still use Korean a lot, I study English, the Korean way.
how can i do this?
>>What should I do?

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